Shout out to Jen Brinn of the Cat Vacuuming Society Writers Group of Northern Virginia for sending this in!
“Few mistakes sour good writing like nominalizations, or, as Helen Sword likes to call them, zombie nouns. Zombie nouns transform simple and straightforward prose into verbose and often confusing writing. Keep your nouns away from elongating nominalizations!”
Lesson by Helen Sword, animation by Bran Dougherty-Johnson.